. When I started my Down Draft, it was about...
Donald trump and why he is a fares.
2. I've expanded it by also writing about...
How he is at the top of the polls against all sensible explanations.
3. The most helpful feedback I've had was...
The article Dr. P gave me about how politicians are having less and less experience.
4. In order to make my piece awesome, I'd really like help with...
Finding some new and interesting statistics.
Donald trump and why he is a fares.
2. I've expanded it by also writing about...
How he is at the top of the polls against all sensible explanations.
3. The most helpful feedback I've had was...
The article Dr. P gave me about how politicians are having less and less experience.
4. In order to make my piece awesome, I'd really like help with...
Finding some new and interesting statistics.